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雅思大作文议论文高分范文解析:教育话题

  Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient , It has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted.

  How far do you agree with this statement?

  Key words analysis

  reliant: 信赖的,可靠的

  convenient: 方便的

  negative effect: 负面影响

  educational purpose: 教育目的

  restrict: 限制,这里相当于limited

  Argument:

  这是属于议论文中的argument类型,通常会在agree或disagree之间进行选择。但是该题特别提到说how far do you agree or disagree,那么我们最好是能够讨论到这个事件的两个方面,然后给出自己的意见。

  Possible reasons:

  互联网可以使人们更容易的查找到资料

  互联网有很多的在线课程,使得学习更便捷

  互联网的很多信息没有经过过滤,难辨真假

  互联网信息的丰富可能使得一些学生直接复制,而不进行研究,反而导致学习无效

  Model Essay 1 – Part 1

  Introduction

  Nowadays, the Internet is used widely in education around the world. Some people say it is beneficial for teaching and learning because there is so much information available. However, others claim that the Internet is bad for students' research skills and believe that its use should be restricted. I believe that use of the Internet should be limited in some ways, but it is still a valuable educational tool.

  Main body 1

  Firstly, the Internet is essential for many people today. It is widely used in the workplace and people's everyday lives,both for finding information, for personal finance, for keeping in touch with friends and family, for social networking and so on. Therefore school students should learn how to use it correctly. In addition, students also need it for research in school and university subjects. Nowadays the most up-to-date information can be found on the Internet, rather than in books which can become out of date very quickly. Using the Internet is a convenient way of finding out information and developing independent research skills.

  Model Essay 1 – Part 2

  Main body 2

  However, the Internet has some negative aspects. For example, not all websites are reliable or contain accurate information. Students need to learn how to evaluate and check the material they find on the Internet. Also, many students simply copy large amounts of material, such as essays from the Internet. Some students then pretend that this material is their own work, which is illegal. If students simply copy information or material from the Internet without understanding or analyzingit, they will not learn it fully. Teachers need to teach students how to research and use information from the Internet properly.

  Conclusion

  In conclusion, schools and universities should teach students how to use the Internet by teaching them good research skills. If students know how to use the Internet effectively, they are likely to become better students and have better employment opportunities in the future.

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